Question

14．假如你是李华，一名高中生．请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿，呼吁同学们调节好自己的学习和生活．发言稿的内容要点如下：
1．许多同学为了学习，晚上经常熬夜，白天课堂上容易犯困
2．有的同学没有养成良好的饮食习惯
3．针对以上现状，提出建议
注意：
1．词数80左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear everyone，
I'm greatly honoured to make a short speech today．                                 
That's all．Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，根据题目要求可知以第一人称的口吻来进行叙述，主要用一般现在时态．内容分成两部分：一 叙述学生的问题；二 提出改正的建议．
高分句型：
1．And some classmates even develop a bad eating habit，which （引导定语从句，which代指主句）will surely do harm to their health
一些同学形成了不好的饮食习惯，这肯定会对他们的健康有害．
2．Only in this way can we keep fit and study well（only引导状语位于句首，主句用倒装）
只有用这种方法，我们才能保持健康，好好学习．

解答 Dear everyone，
     I'm greatly honoured to make a short speech today．Recently I have found that many classmates study late into the night．As a result，they often cannot help falling asleep in class during the day．And some classmates even develop a bad eating habit，which will surely do harm to their health（高分句型一）（学生的问题）．
      As is known to all，it's extremely important for us students to have enough sleep and a proper diet．We must make wise use of our time，and develop a good eating habit．Only in this way can we keep fit and study well（高分句型二）．I hope you will agree with me（改正的建议）．
      That's all．Thank you for listening!

点评 倒装句式是高中生应该掌握的一种句式，也是作文的亮点，除了only的倒装，否定词位于句首时，也需要用倒装，例如：
Never have I been there before．