题目内容
18．冬春交替，气温多变，很多人染上流感．为此，你班举行了"预防疾病以及防止病毒传播"为主题的班会．请根据下表内容，谈谈预防疾病以及防止病毒传播的简单方法，并阐述理由．| 方法 | 1．勤洗手 | 2．少外出 |
| 理由 | 有效预防各种疾病；病毒颗粒存在于桌面、电话和其他物体的表面并通过手传播． | 尽量少用公共交通工具，尽量少接触流感患者，有症状者（高烧咳嗽肌肉酸痛等）及时就医． |
3．参考词汇：颗粒病毒：virus particles
Hello，everybody！It's true that many people are infected with flu virus when the weather changes frequently．
Thank you．
分析 本篇作文写作要点比较详细，内容比较清楚，但要求学生围绕提示适当发挥，拓展主题．写作的难点是将所给的几个要点合理地组成比较通顺的短文，因此在明确表达要点后，要仔细组织语言，简要地列出提纲，合理安排结构．短文主题明确，能合理地根据提示组织文章的主体结构，且妙用了一些结构将语言点组织成了一篇逻辑严密的短文．文章语言地道、语法规范、行文流畅，层次清晰．（1）文章布局合理，结构严密．There is one easy way to…It's a surprisingly effective way to…the other simple way 让文章结构井然．（2）文中的主语从句（it's more likely that…），定语从句（who might be infected）以及状语从句（If people have the flu…）也值得借鉴．
It's a surprisingly effective way to prevent all sorts of diseases，including the flu virus．（高分句型一）
However，it's more likely that virus particles can linger on tabletops，telephones and other surfaces and be transferred via fingers to the mouth and nose．（高分句型二）
Staying at home is the other simple way．It means staying away from other people who might be infected．（高分句型三）
解答 Hello，everybody！It's true that many people are infected with flu virus when the weather changes frequently．I'll tell you two easy ways to deal with it．
There is one easy way to protect again infection----frequent hand washing．It's a surprisingly effective way to prevent all sorts of diseases，including the flu virus．（高分句型一）Influenza can spread in the way of coughs or sneezes．However，it's more likely that virus particles can linger on tabletops，telephones and other surfaces and be transferred via fingers to the mouth and nose．（高分句型二）
Staying at home is the other simple way．It means staying away from other people who might be infected．（高分句型三）If people have the flu，they should avoid using public transportation．Anyone with flu-like symptoms such as a sudden fever，cough or muscle aches should see a doctor at once．
Thank you!
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
