Question

7．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖．校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验．请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：
1．参加英语角的益处；
2．坚持写英语日记的作用；
3．英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助．
注意：1．词数：120-150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
As a high schoolstudent，I consider English a very importantsubject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took anactive part in English corner and other after-class English activities，which benefit me a lot．
In the English corner，I meet many friends，who sharethe same interest with me．Besides，sometimes，someforeigners are glad to join us．By talkingwith them，my oral English improved a lot．I also find it useful to keep English diaries．I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to myEnglish．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only bypractice will we make more progress．Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to myimprovement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，写一篇稿件，介绍课外学习英语的经验．要点包括：参加英语角的益处；坚持写英语日记的作用；英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助．写作时以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：learn words byheart （用心背单词），feel nervous （觉得紧张），give sb good advice on （给某人关于…的建议），chances to do sth （做某事的机会），make much progress （取得很大进展），memorize new words （记忆新单词）．

解答 As a high schoolstudent，I consider English a very importantsubject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took anactive part in English corner and other after-class English activities，which benefit me a lot．【高分句型】（开头---引出话题）
 In the English corner，I meet many friends，who sharethe same interest with me．【高分句型】Besides，sometimes，some foreigners are glad to join us．By talking with them，my oralEnglish improved a lot．（参加英语角的益处）  I also find it useful to keep Englishdiaries．I keep on doing it these years and it ishelpful to my English．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only bypractice will we make more progress．【高分句型】（坚持写日记的作用） Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to myimprovement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．【高分句型】（英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）的帮助）
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．（结尾---总结概括）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．