Question

【题目】假设你是高二学生李华，寒假即将来临，学校要求学生们在寒假期间做件有意义的事情。你和你的好朋友李明商量打算去当志愿者，为保护渌江河做贡献。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语文章，内容包括下面两个方面：

1. 渌江河的现状： ①大量垃圾被扔进河里；②大量污水被排放到河里;

2. 办法及措施（至少两点）：打捞垃圾 ...

注意：1.词数100个左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

The winter holiday is coming. As middle school students, my best friend Li Ming and I are going to do something meaningful.

Answer 1

【答案】The winter holiday is coming.My best friend Li Ming and I are going to do something meaningful.

As can be seen, the Lujiang River is not as clean as it used to be. People throw a large amount of rubbish into the river everyday and many factories pour a great deal of waste water into it, causing a serious water pollution. It is time that we did something to protect the river now.

Along with other volunteers, Li Ming and I will pick up the rubbish floating on the river, which may make the river look cleaner. What’s more, we intend to give a speech in public to increase people’s awareness of protecting our mother river.

Through the efforts of the government and all the citizens in Liling, I’m sure the Lujiang River will take on a new look in the near future.

【解析】这篇短文是一篇提纲类作文，在这篇短文中要表达一下自己假期为保护渌江河做贡献，当志愿者的安排，文章主要包括三个方面，即1. 渌江河的现状： ①大量垃圾被扔进河里；②大量污水被排放到河里;2. 办法及措施（至少两点）：打捞垃圾 ...，3.努力的效果。要用自己的话把这三方面的安排表达清楚，不能遗漏一条。通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用第一人称，一般现在时和一般过去时来表达。同时可以有适当的发挥，以使文章内容充实。表达时还要注意使用正确的连接词，使文章表达连贯、流畅。
【亮点说明】这篇范文书写规范，内容完整，层次分明。短文分成了四段，第一段先点明了主题，要放假了，要过一个有意义的假期；第二、三段是中心段，具体表达了渌江河的现状和假期做志愿者的安排；第四段是一个总结段，点明努力的效果，即渌江河呈现新面貌。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如定语从句：1.As can be seen, the Lujiang River is not as clean as it used to be.2. the river, which may make the river look cleaner.虚拟语气：It is time that we did something to protect the river now.非谓语结构：waste water into it, causing a serious water pollution.等。