题目内容
6.假设你班将举行一次英语班会,主题是"中学生应该如何使用家长给的零花钱".请你根据提示写一篇发言稿.使用方式 | 好处 |
存入银行 | 养成节约的习惯 |
购买书籍 | 获取知识 |
其他 | 培养兴趣(音乐、体育、集邮等) |
Dear friends,
How should we deal with .
分析 这是提纲类短文,文章的要点以表格的形式给出来的,考生只需要翻译即可,难度不大,在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把零花钱的使用方法都描述出来,注意改变文章的样式.难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的.要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点,使文章成为一个整体.选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇,也要运用多种句型,让文章更有变化.
亮点句型一:we can spend the money going to the concerts,watching sports games or collecting stamps to develop our interests or get us into good habits.我们可以花钱去听音乐会,看体育比赛或集邮,以培养我们的兴趣或使我们养成良好的习惯.本句用动词不定式to develop our interests or get us into good habits做目的状语;运用的spend sth doing sth的句型结构.
亮点句型二:we should take good care of the pocket money we have and not waste it on useless things.我们应该好好爱护我们的零用钱,不要浪费在无用的东西上.本句中we have 是一个定语从句,修饰先行词pocket money.
解答 Dear friends,
How should we deal with the pocket money given to us by our parents or we earn from our work?Of course we can use it as we like,but I think there are three ways we should employ to cope with it.
First of all,we should learn to save money by putting it away in a bank and take it out when we need it most.Then we should use the money to buy the books we want.In this way,we can enrich ourselves with knowledge.Besides,we can spend the money going to the concerts,watching sports games or collecting stamps to develop our interests or get us into good habits.(亮点句型一)
In a word,we should take good care of the pocket money we have and not waste it on useless things.(亮点句型二)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | when | B. | because | C. | while | D. | whether |