题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件:
1.礼物选择: 2.你的理由;3.其它和解建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右: 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求根据你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议, 你根据要点给Tom回一封邮件。写作要点要求:1.礼物选择: 2.你的理由;3.其它和解建议。故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。
写作亮点:本篇要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,句子简洁明了,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:宾语从句that you are considering making up with Peter.和that we can be good friends forever.虚拟语气If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.定语从句which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.动名词做主语taking a bike和being sincere。It’s convenient for him to句型No matter what you do做状语。As far as I know, In the meanwhile, Besides, Apart from等连接词。
【题目】随着手机的普及化,越来越多的学生将手机带入校园。你作为校刊记者对一些师生就学生随身携带手机的现象进行了采访。请根据下面所提供的信息用英语给你校校刊写一篇报道,客观介绍人们的看法,并表述自己的观点。要点如下:
支持者的看法 | 反对者的看法 | 你的看法 |
方便与家人朋友联系; 可以放松一下自己; 一些手机应用对学习有帮助; | 使学生分心,成绩下降; 影响睡眠; | ? |
注意:1. 内容应包括以上要点,可以适当增加细节,以使内容连贯;
2. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:手机应用 APP 使分心 distract(动词)/distraction(名词)
It’s common nowadays in some schools that students take mobile phones with them. And people have distinctly different ideas on this issue.