题目内容
20.近年来不少国家出现水资源短缺现象,如何做到节约水资源是一个全球面临的一个问题.请谈谈你有什么好的解决方法,且说明此方法的好处.分析 首先要注意审题,把题目的意思看清楚.这个题目的意思是说近年来不少国家出现水资源短缺现象,如何做到节约水资源是一个全球面临的一个问题.请谈谈你有什么好的解决方法,且说明此方法的好处.在第一段里,大家要开门见山,清楚明确地点题,然后用一个具体的事例来支持自己的观点谈谈你有什么好的解决方法.注意事例一定要和自己表达的中心思想紧密结合.并且说明此方法的好处.最后一段归纳总结,呼应或升华文章中心.
亮点部分
However,with the increasing population and industrial development,water pollution has become a serious problem.(高分句型)
Large amounts of wastewater go into rivers and seas directly without being treated,which can be dangerous to people.(高分句型)
So it's high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.(高分句型)
解答 Water is the source of life.We can't live without water.
However,with the increasing population and industrial development,water pollution has become a serious problem.(高分句型)Large amounts of wastewater go into rivers and seas directly without being treated,which can be dangerous to people.(高分句型)Also lots of people pay no attention to saving water in daily life,while in some place water is badly needed It's time for us to take some measures to improve the situation.(高分句型) Factories should treat the wastewater before letting it go into rivers.We can play a positive role in saving water.So it's high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.(高分句型)Stop pollution and save water,otherwise,we cannot survive on the earth.
With fresh water,the world will be prosperous.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧