题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你的美国朋友彼得来信,表示想来中国旅游,询问你是否有时间接待。请给他回信,要点如下:
1.来信已悉,欢迎来华;
2.航班信息,以便接机;
3.住宿地点,旅行计划。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm so glad to hear from you, knowing that you are visiting China.
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm so glad to hear from you, knowing that you are visiting China. I'll be free at that time and I'm eager to meet you. Please tell me your flight number and arrival time so that I can pick you up at the airport. You are welcome to stay at my house, where you can meet my family and friends. My plan goes like this: During the first week, I'll take you to Beijing to show you around some famous royal palaces as well as the Great Wall, thus helping you know more about Chinese history. Then in the following week, we'll go to Yunnan Province, because it's amazing to experience the traditional customs and beautiful sceneries there.
If you have any suggestions, please write to inform me.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文写作。写作时注意不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】语句通顺,结构严谨,使用高级句式。Please tell me your flight number and arrival time so that I can pick you up at the airport.祈使句和目的状语从句用于其中;You are welcome to stay at my house, where you can meet my family and friends.非限制性定语从句运用恰当;I'll take you to Beijing to show you around some famous royal palaces as well as the Great Wall, thus helping you know more about Chinese history.现在分词作结果状语,非常巧妙;Then in the following week, we'll go to Yunnan Province, because it's amazing to experience the traditional customs and beautiful sceneries there.句中使用原因状语从句;If you have any suggestions, please write to inform me.条件状语从句和祈使句完美结合。