题目内容
20.假定你是李华,晨光中学的学生,刚从友好学校美国威尔逊中学交换回国,现给寄宿家庭的史密斯夫妇写封电子邮件.要点如下:1、昨天下午2点已平安到家,下周一上学;
2、感谢史密斯夫妇三个月以来的照顾;
3、欢迎随时来中国游玩.
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Mr.Smith,
How is everything going?I'm delighted to tell you that I've returned home safe and sound at 2:00 pm yesterday.(高分句型一)Thank you very much for your kindness during my stay with your family.
Without your help,1 wouldn't have got accustomed to American life so soon and wouldn't have made great progress in English.(高分句型二) To express my gratitude,I'm sending you some Chinese paper cuts as a gift.As is known to all,paper cutting is a form of unique traditional Chinese folk art with a long history.(高分句型三)They arereally beautiful and I'm sure you will be fond of them.
I hope you and your family can travel to China someday.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华,晨光中学的学生,刚从友好学校美国威尔逊中学交换回国,现给寄宿家庭的史密斯夫妇写封电子邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:昨天下午2点已平安到家,下周一上学;感谢史密斯夫妇三个月以来的照顾;欢迎随时来中国游玩.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:safe and sound平安无恙;get accustomed to 习惯于;make great progress 取得巨大进步; As is known to all众所周知;be fond of 喜欢;
I'm delighted to tell you that I've returned home safe and sound at 2:00pm yesterday.(高分句型一)
Without your help,1 wouldn't have got accustomed to American life so soon and wouldn't have made great progress in English.(高分句型二)
As is known to all,paper cutting is a form of unique traditional Chinese folk art with a long history.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mr.Smith,
How is everything going?I'm delighted to tell you that I've returned home safe and sound at 2:00pm yesterday.(高分句型一)Thank you very much for your kindness during my stay with your family.
Without your help,1 wouldn't have got accustomed to American life so soon and wouldn't have made great progress in English.(高分句型二) To express my gratitude,I'm sending you some Chinese paper cuts as a gift.As is known to all,paper cutting is a form of unique traditional Chinese folk art with a long history.(高分句型三)They are really beautiful and I'm sure you will be fond of them.
I hope you and your family can travel to China someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | came up | B. | broke up | C. | took up | D. | sprang up |
One day while her husband was asleep,the woman (4)Cthe sparrow,took it far away from the house,and let it go,warning it never to(5)A.The old man missed his little friend and hoped it would come back,(6)Cit never did.Then one day,several weeks later,he was walking past an old house when he heard a (7)Dsound.He looked up and there was the (8)B,sitting on the gate.The sparrow gave the old man a gold (9)Ait had found in the house.
The old man did not (10)Cmuch about money,but his wife was(11)Dwhen she saw the coin,and made up her mind to get more from the sparrow.(12)B,early the next morning she slipped out of her house and made her (13)Ato the old house.When she saw the sparrow she(14)Cit to return.
"If you have found (15)B,bring it along and I'll spend it all on you."She promised.
The sparrow brought her an old(16)Dwith the help of its friends.The basket was(17)Abut the woman did not wait to find out what was in it.She grabbed it and ran at once because she was (18)Bthat the sparrow would follow and take up residence(住所)in her house again.
The moment she reached home,she (19)Dthe basket,expecting it to be filled with gold and silver.Instead,out (20)Ca lot of sparrows.
The woman spent the rest of her life trying to drive the sparrows out.
1.A.danger | B.life | C.health | D.help |
2.A.refused | B.decided | C.managed | D.failed |
3.A.cleaning | B.sweeping | C.building | D.dirtying |
4.A.fed | B.noticed | C.caught | D.killed |
5.A.return | B.fly | C.stay | D.cry |
6.A.and | B.if | C.but | D.until |
7.A.strange | B.sweet | C.loud | D.familiar |
8.A.cat | B.sparrow | C.basket | D.stick |
9.A.coin | B.watch | C.ring | D.cup |
10.A.bring | B.take | C.care | D.put |
11.A.afraid | B.sad | C.nervous | D.excited |
12.A.However | B.Therefore | C.Instead | D.Luckily |
13.A.way | B.mark | C.picture | D.sign |
14.A.forbade | B.forced | C.begged | D.helped |
15.A.food | B.treasure | C.rooms | D.plant |
16.A.bowl | B.box | C.chair | D.basket |
17.A.covered | B.empty | C.big | D.small |
18.A.pleased | B.afraid | C.anxious | D.hopeful |
19.A.laid | B.broke | C.hid | D.opened |
20.A.walked | B.ran | C.flew | D.jumped |