Question

1．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
Many children have access to online games or chatting．Teachers and parents are against children play games too often．Some parents even don't allow their children touch computers．Are computers so bad for children？I don't agree complete．There is no doubt that spending too much time playing games have a bad effect on children's health and learning．However，just like the saying goes，every coin has two sides．Computers have advantages if they are being used correctly．For example，we can surf the Internet for needy informations．Besides，we can send  emails instead of write letters or telephoning when we keep in touch with our family，relatives or friends．What's more，online games or chatting are forms of relaxing us．The most important thing is to lead children to controlling themselves．

Answer 1

分析 本文探讨了孩子接触网络到底是不是一件坏的事情？并发表了自己的看法．

解答 Many children have access to online games or chatting．Teachers and parents are against children play games too often．Some parents even don't allow their children touch computers．Are computers so bad for children？I don't agree complete．There is no doubt that spending too much time playing games have a bad effect on children's health and learning．However，just like the saying goes，every coin has two sides．Computers have advantages if they are being used correctly．For example，we can surf the Internet for needy informations．Besides，we can send  emails instead of write letters or telephoning when we keep in touch with our family，relatives or friends．What's more，online games or chatting are forms of relaxing us． The most important thing is to lead children to controlingthemselves．
详解：
1．Play改为playing，考察动名词． 此句考察介词against为反对的意思，后需接动名词做宾语．
2．touch 前加to，考察介词．allow sb to do sth 固定短语意为容许某人做某事．
3．complete改为 completely，考察副词．修饰动词agree需用副词形式．
4．have改为 has，考察谓语．该句的主语为spending…是一个动名词做主语，所以谓语动词需用单数．
5．like 改为as，考察连接词．the saying goes为一个句子，索引需用连词as引导，like为介词不符合．
6．去掉being，根据句意没有正在被动的意思，所以不需用现在进行时．
7．informations改为 information，考察名词单复数．information为不可数名词，所以不能加s．
8．write 改为writing，考察动名词．of为介词，后需接动名词做宾语．
9．us 改为ourselves，考察人称代词．根据句意可知，打游戏和网聊可以使我们自己得到方式，所以需用oueselves反身代词．
10．controlling 改为control 考察非谓语． lead sb to do sth为固定短语意为促使某人做某事．

点评 短文改错主要考察学生将所学的语法知识运用在具体语境中的能力，在平时学习时需对一些基本的语法知识掌握．