Question

【题目】假设你是李华，万圣节刚过，你向你的美国笔友Jack介绍你校美国外教Michael领你们做的万圣节活动。

要点： 1.活动(如做南瓜灯，玩trick or treat游戏；吃糖果；讲万圣节来历等) ；2.意义；3.感受。

参考词汇：南瓜灯 jack-o’-lantern; 万圣节 Halloween ; 来历origin

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】How are you doing these days? I’m more than eager to share with you my exciting experience during Halloween!

Through various amusing and organized activities, my foreign teacher Michael had us enjoy a special and unforgettable festival. To begin with, he introduced the origin of Halloween, which made us have a better understanding of the American culture. Besides, when making jack-o’-lanterns and doing trick-or –treat games, we not only had fun in playing interesting games, but tasted real American life. In addition, to our delight, yummy sweets and candies add more pleasure to the project/festive atmosphere.

It is these activities that give me pleasure as well as cultural differences. I do love such moments providing me with great joy and knowledge. How is your Halloween? I’m looking forward to your reply.

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【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: eager to do渴望做某事，In addition另外，此外。还使用了定语从句To begin with, he introduced the origin of Halloween, which made us have a better understanding of the American culture.和强调句It is these activities that give me pleasure as well as cultural differences.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。