[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Volunteer travel, that is familiar to foreigners, has nowadays become more and more popular in China. Young travelers volunteer to work for youth hostels so that they can eat and live there for something. At the same time, they can enjoy the local scenery on their spare time.

As far as I am concern, volunteer travel has some advantages and benefits from you a lot. It can save you lot of money by providing free accommodations, which makes it possible for you to travel to much more places and experience different cultures. Meanwhile, volunteer travel enrich your life by offer different jobs in youth hostels, which also can change your way of life. All in all, it was meaningful.

【答案】1.第一句：that 改为 which

2.第二句：something改为nothing 或free

3.第三句：on改为in

4.第四句：concerned前加am；

5.去掉from

6.第五句：lot前加 a或 lot改为lots

7.much改为 many或去掉much

8.第六句：enrich改为enriches ；

9.offer改为offering

10.第七句：was改为is

【解析】试题分析：本文讲述了志愿者旅行，这种活动的志愿者通过为青年旅馆做一些事情来省住宿费用，这不仅能让志愿者到更多的地方旅行，还可以通过做不同的工作来丰富你的人生，改变生活方式。

【1】【1】that→which 考查非限制性定语从句。非限制性定语从句缺少句子主语，不能使用that，根据先行词是travel，故应该使用which。

【2】【2】something→nothing/free 考查语境。句意：年轻的旅行者志愿为青年旅馆做一些事情以便于他们在那里吃住都不用钱。

【3】【3】on→in 考查介词。in one’s spare time在某人的闲暇时光。

【4】【4】concern→concerned 考查固定搭配。As far as I am concerned据我所知。

【5】【5】from去掉考查动词。benefit sb对某人有益；benefit from得益于。这里表示对你有益，故去掉from。

【6】【6】you后面的lot→lots或在lot之前加a 考查固定搭配。a lot of/lots of表示“大量，很多”。

【7】【7】much→many 考查形容词。place是可数名词，不能用much修饰，应该使用many来修饰。

【8】【8】enrich→enriches 前面的主语是单数，所以谓语动词应该使用单三形式。

【9】【9】offer→offering 考查非谓语动词。前面的by是介词，后面跟动名词或名词。

【10】【10】was→is 考查时态。全文使用一般现在时，所以这里不能使用过去时。

练习册系列答案

1. 节电、节水；

2. 采用公共交通方式；

3. 不乱扔垃圾，拒绝使用一次性筷子及塑料袋，支持“光盘行动”。

注意：

1. 次数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：一次性筷子once-off chopsticks ; 光盘行动 “clear your plate” campaign

Dear friends,

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Thank you!

Student Union

【题目】文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

1.Every time I will meet with difficulties in study,I solve it by myself.2.It doesn’t make sense to complain after defeated.3.Though he was a enthusiastic football player,but recently he seems to have become uninterested.4.People from America and Britain have no difficulties in understanding each other.5.According to a new report,British scientists have found out a cure of this disease.6.The law is intending to protect women from been abused.7.What is often the casein life,there is no simply answer.

【题目】请你修改以下作文（见答题卡）。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：只允许修改10处，从第11处起不计分。

Dear editor，

I am a student from a key school. Therefore, I find myself tiring of studying all these days, which worries me a lot of. Though I often got high marks in exams, I don't like it at all. I often think all the subject will become useless while I grow up except English. So I am eager to learn and practice English in my spare time. But I have to spend most of my time solve problems in maths, and chemistry to prepare for the college entrance examination. I also can't afford live up to my parents' high expectations. How do you think I should do with this situation?

Yours，

Li Yue

【题目】My husband and I were paying a visit 【1】 my parents in Tucson. We went to a fast-food restaurant for dinner together. My husband went to the counter 【2】 (order )dishes and I stood with my parents.

My dad is 90 【3】 (year) old. He can hardly see very well and walks with a stick. I was scanning the restaurant, 【4】 (wait) to sit at the first table that was more convenient than others. A woman who was 【5】 (sit) with her son made eye contact with me and asked me to come to her. With a puzzled look on my face, I pointed to ___【6】 (me) and said , “Me ?” She nodded and said , “ Yes, you.” I walked to the table and she said , “ Bring your family here. I can finish eating at the counter. My son is in 【7】 hurry to leave anyway.” My eyes 【8】 (fill)with tears as she wiped down the table and guided my dad to the seat.

I always believe that there are 【9】 (nature) kind people in this world. This woman has set a good example to her son, 【10】 is a really lucky guy.

【题目】Children grow quickly, especially their feet, but many families cannot buy new shoes each time a child needs them. As a result, about 300 million children around the world go barefoot. Those children risk picking up diseases and parasites from the soil.

An American man may have a solution for those barefoot kids — a shoe that grows with the child. Kenton Lee is the creator of The Shoe That Grows. He explains how the shoe works and how it is able to last so long.

“It grows in three places: the front; it can also grow on the side with Velcro; and on the back with our buckle. It can last up to five years. The bottom is compressed rubber like tire rubber. The top is just high-quality leather.” The shoe comes in two sizes: small that fits children aged 4 to 9 and large for children aged 9 to 14.

Lee says he got the idea for the shoe while working as a volunteer in an orphanage in Kenya. “… and there was a little girl in a white dress walking next to me. And I just remember looking down and seeing how small her shoes were. They were just way too small for her feet. They were so small that she had to cut open the front of her shoes to let her toes stick out. And I just remember thinking, wouldn't it be nice if there were a pair of shoes that could grow with her feet?”

However, Lee says it was not easy to turn his idea into a reality. “I kept writing down I should do this because of this or because of that. All these reasons why it really was important for me to try to make the shoes that could grow and try to help.” Finally, in 2009 Lee founded a non-profit organization called Because International. In the office of Because International, Lee keeps a pair of his own shoes to help him remember his promise. “I told myself I would not get new shoes until the idea was done. So, those are the shoes that I wore for a little over five years.”

【1】Which of the following is the characteristic of the newly invented shoes?

A. They are more expensive.

B. They are not so comfortable.

C. They can grow with a child.

D. They come in different sizes.

【2】Who is this kind of newly invented shoes intended for?

A. All the teenagers.

B. Children aged 4 to 14.

C. Middle-aged women in Africa.

D. Senior citizens with low income.

【3】What does Para. 4 mainly talk about?

A. How the shoes work.

B. How Lee got his inspiration.

C. How to make the new shoes.

D. Where to order this kind of shoes.

【4】Why does Kenton Lee keep a pair of his own shoes in the office?

A. To remind him of his promise.

B. To copy the design of them.

C. To get a change conveniently.

D. To use them as an example.

【题目】假设你是李华，万圣节刚过，你向你的美国笔友Jack介绍你校美国外教Michael领你们做的万圣节活动。

要点： 1.活动(如做南瓜灯，玩trick or treat游戏；吃糖果；讲万圣节来历等) ；2.意义；3.感受。

参考词汇：南瓜灯 jack-o’-lantern; 万圣节 Halloween ; 来历origin

Dear Jack,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【题目】Studies show that you may be lied to every day anywhere from 10 to 200 times. We say, “Nice song.” “Honey, you don’t look fat in that, no.” But another study showed that strangers lied three times within the first 10 minutes of meeting each other. We lie more to strangers than we lie to coworkers. Men lie eight times more about themselves than they do about other people. Women lie more to protect other people. If you’re married, you’re going to lie to your wife/ husband in one out of every 10 communications. If you’re unmarried, that number drops to three. But look, if at some point you got lied to, it’s because you agreed to get lied to. Truth about lying: lying’s a cooperative act. Not all lies are harmful. Sometimes we’re willing to get lied to for social dignity(尊严), maybe to keep a private secret.

Lying is complex. It exists in our daily and business lives. We’re deeply disturbed by the truth. We explain it, sometimesfor very good reasons, other times just because we don’t understand the gaps between ideals and realities in our lives. We’re against lying, but secretly we’re for it in ways that our society has practiced for centuries and centuries. It’s as old as breathing. It’s part of our culture and history. Think the stories fromDante, Shakespeare, the Bible, News of the World.

Lying has great value to the evolution of human beings. Researchers have long known that the more intelligent the species, the more likely it is to lie. We humans like to become leaders. It starts really early. How early? Well, babies will pretend to cry, pause, wait to see who’s coming and then go right back to crying. One-year-olds learn hiding truth. Five-year-olds lie outright and try to control through flattery (奉承). Nine-year-olds, masters of covering up.

So what do we do about lies? Well, there are steps we can take to guide our way through the bushes. Trained lie spotters (检测员) get to the truth 90% of the time. The rest of us, we’re only 54% right. There are clever liars and stupid liars, but there’re no real creative liars. While lying, we all make the same mistakes, and we all use the same techniques.

【1】The passage tells us in the first paragraph that lying is very__________.

A. harmful B. easy

C. interesting D. common

【2】Lying is complex because__________.

A. people are for it as well as against it B. it is the whole part of great culture

C. ancient stories are full of lies D. it is practiced by clever ones

【3】According to the passage, a lie works when __________.

A. the liar’s words are sweet enough B. someone gives the liar cooperation

C. we are willing to lie for good reasons D. it is given to a complete stranger

【4】What might the writer talk about in the following passage?

A. How to become clever liars. B. How to avoid stupid lies.

C. How to tell truth from lies. D. How to get through the bushes.

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail. 内容如下：

1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，自去年年底以来发生数次雾霾天气。

2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生。

3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。

要求：

1.参考词汇：雾霾haze；雾霾天气 hazy weather

2.词数在100词左右。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

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