Question

4．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分．
Miss Li is our English teacher．One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，"Our English teacher is going to have a operation today．It has not decided yet who will take his place．"The class all turned silently at his words．Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door．She looked tiring and pale．"I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I don't want you to miss a single class．"she said at a low voice，"A new teacher will take my place and I hope you'll get on well with her．I'll return back as soon as I'm well．"Heard this，all of us were moved to tears．What a good teacher we have!

Answer 1

分析 李老师教我们英语，有一天，班长告诉我们英语老师病了，还没决定谁来代替她的课，同学们都沉默了．就中那时，李老师出现在门口，她看起来有点疲惫，脸色苍白．她小声地说，她已经把手术推迟到明天了，因为她不想错过一节课．新老师会来上课，希望我们相处融洽．她好一点就会回来．听到她的话，我们都被感动得流泪，多好的老师啊！

解答 Miss Li is our English teacher．One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，

"Our English teacher is going to have a operation today．It has not∧decided yet who will take his place．
                                                     an                                       加been                                  her           
"The class all turned silently at his words．Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door．
                              silent                                                                     appeared
She looked tiring and pale．"I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow 
                 tired
because I don't want you to miss a single class．"she said at a low voice，
                                                                                    in
"A new teacher will take my place and I hope you'll get on well with her．I'll return back as soon as I'm well．"
                                                                                                                            去掉                     better
Heard this，all of us were moved to tears．What a good teacher we have!
Hearing
1．a改为an．句中operation是元音开头的单词，要用an．
2．加been．句意表达的是被动，这件事还没有决定．
3．his改为her．逻辑指代错误，句意指代的是Miss Li，要用her来指代． 
4．silently改为silent．句中turn表示变得，是一个系动词，后接形容词作表语．
5．appears改为appeared．文章讲述的是过去的一件事，要用一般过去时态． 
6．tiring改为tired．句中修饰的是人，要用过去分词，现在分词形式事物的特征．
7．at改为in．短语搭配，in a low voice小声说话．  
8．back去掉．return表示就表示回来，back重复了．
9．well改为better．暗含比较，句意表达的是比现在好点． 
10．heard改为hearing．句中Hear和all of us构成主谓关系，要用表示主动的现在分词．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．