题目内容
7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There is a widespread concern among us students about if an admission fee should be charged for local parks.60% of us holds the opinion that it's not proper to do so．A park is supposed to be a place where the public can relax them．Besides，working out in the open air is both physically or mentally beneficial．If an admission fee must be paid by the visitors，it is necessarily to build a gate and surrounding walls．In that case，the park doesn't look on attractive any more．Therefore，40% of my classmates do not share same opinion．They say the money from all the ticket can be used for paying the gardeners and make some repairs．
分析 本文主要介绍学生对当地公园是否应当收费发表看法．不赞成收费的同学认为公园有利于公众锻炼；赞成收费的同学认为门票费用于付钱给园丁和公园的修理．
解答 There is a widespread concern among us students about if an admission fee should be charged for local parks.60% of us holds the opinion that it's not proper to do so．A park is supposed to be a place where the public can relax them．Besides，working out in the open air is both physically or mentally beneficial．If an admission fee must be paid by the visitors，it is necessarily to build a gate and surrounding walls．In that case，the park doesn't look on attractive any more．Therefore，40% of my classmates do not share∧same opinion．They say the money from all the ticket can be used for paying the gardeners and make some repairs．
详解：
1．if改为whether 考查词语用法．about是介词，后接宾语从句时用whether引导宾语从句，不可用if．
2．holds改为hold 考查主谓一致．主语60% of us表示复数概念，谓语动词也应用复数形式hold．
3．them改为themselves 考查代词．根据句意：公众放松自己．用反身代词themselves．
4．or改为and 考查固定搭配．both…and…意为"两者都…"，作为关联并列连词，它通常应连接两个相同性质的句子成分．
5．necessarily改为necessary 考查形容词．be动词后接形容词用表语．
6．去掉on 考查词语用法．look是连系动词，后接形容词作表语，on是多余的，要去掉．
7．Therefore改为However 考查副词．however表示转折，尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时，表示转折，其意为"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开．
8．加the 考查冠词．same用作形容词时指谈论的不同人和不同事物是同样的或实际上是同一个人或同一个事物，总和the连用．
9．ticket改为tickets 考查名词复数．ticket是可数名词，其前有all修饰时要用复数形式．
10．make改为making 考查动名词．paying the gardeners和making some repairs都作介词for的宾语．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
