题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim即将过生日。你打算送给他一件具有中国特色的礼物。请给他写封信,内容包括:
1. 生日祝福;
2. 礼物介绍;
3. 选择该礼物的原因。
注意: 1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Next Monday is your birthday. I’m sending you a gift.
It’s a lacquer engraving handicraft plate. Lacquer engraving is a traditional Chinese folk craft art. The engraving is done on layers of red lacquer painted on a wooden base. You know, the color of red stands for happiness and good fortune and is especially favored by Chinese people.
Do you know why I chose this gift for you? It’s because there’s a pattern of the Great Wall on the plate. I still remember your astonished look when both of us finally made it to the highest beacon tower of the Great Wall, seeing the spectacular scene.
I hope you’ll like it. Happy birthday again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。考生需要发挥想象、展开思维,把文章内容写的具体、鲜活并且要有说服力。成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:一般现在时为主;3.文章的内容要点要齐全:(1)生日祝福;(2)礼物介绍;(3)选择该礼物的原因。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,不少于50单词左右。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语书信,文章格式正确,结构合理,内容齐全,同时运用高级句子。Do you know why I chose this gift for you?使用宾语从句;It’s because there’s a pattern of the Great Wall on the plate. Because引导表语从句;I still remember your astonished look when both of us finally made it to the highest beacon tower of the Great Wall, seeing the spectacular scene. When引导时间状语从句,同时现在分词表伴随状态。