Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mike发来电子邮件，询问最近你市举办的“最美家乡”英语演讲比赛活动的情况。请给他回一封电子邮件，介绍以下该活动。要点如下：

1. 来自全市15所36名学生参加了此次英语演讲比赛；

2. 比赛分为三个环节：英语演讲、回答评委提出的问题和才艺表演；

3. 活动的意义。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

On December 9, an English speech contest was held in our city. _______________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

On December 9, an English speech contest was held in out city. 36 students from 15 schools took part. The contest consisted of three rounds; an English speech, answering the questions raised by the judges and a talent show. Every student made an excellent speech in English, whose theme is about “the Beauty of Our City”. When they answered the questions, they felt confident. In the talent show, colorful performances given by them were more than attractive. Undoubtedly, this contest is a big success.

Through the activity, the students have learnt a lot. Not only have they improved their spoken English, but they also enjoy the process of the contest and a sense of achievement. The students from different schools appreciate each other and develop solid friendship.

Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，成文时要注意：1.时态：灵活变换；2.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）来自全市15所36名学生参加了此次英语演讲比赛；（2）比赛分为三个环节：英语演讲、回答评委提出的问题和才艺表演；（3）活动的意义。3.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；4.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。5.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

亮点说明：本文是一篇电子邮件，结构合理，语句精练，运用高级句子。answering the questions raised by the judges a过去分词作后置定语；Every student made an excellent speech in English, whose theme is about “the Beauty of Our City” . whose引导非限制性定语从句；When they answered the questions, they felt confident. In the talent show, colorful performances given by them were more than attractive. When引导时间状语从句；this contest is a big success. a big success的运用巧妙至极；Not only have they improved their spoken English, but they also enjoy the process of the contest and a sense of achievement.倒装句使用经典。