题目内容
4.假如你是李华,你校外教Rita对中国传统文化感兴趣.端午节即将来临,你打算邀请她来家里过端午节.请写一份电子邮件给Rita,要点如下;1.说明写信目的;
2.介绍端午节(时间、纪念屈原);
3.你计划的庆祝活动.
Dear Rita,
Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture,I'd like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family.(高分句型一)
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival,falling on the 5th day of the lunar month May.It is set in honor of a distinguished Chinese poet QuYuan,who has a reputation for his patriotism and contributions to classical poetry.(高分句型二)To help you experience the traditional festival,I sincerely hope you can come to my home and join us in our celebration.We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi and watch dragon boat race on TV,all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture.(高分句型三)
I have the confidence that you will have a good time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文.文章内容要点已经给出.考生在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1.通篇以一般现在时为主.2.要点要齐全.但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列.可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程.3.由于文章是一篇电子邮件,注意文章要以简易书信的形式进行叙述.
【范文亮点】
1.文章采用了"I'd like to 我想要…""in honor of 为了纪念""has a reputation for 在…有声誉""Looking forward to 期待"等高分句式.
2.文章采用了"have a good time玩得开心,join in 参与"等高频词组.
3.开篇使用现在分词作状语."Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture,I'd like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family."
4."The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival,falling on the 5th day of the lunar month May."falling现在分词作状语.
5.which引导非限制性定语从句,"We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi and watch dragon boat race on TV,all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture."
Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture,I'd like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family.(高分句型一)
It is set in honor of a distinguished Chinese poet QuYuan,who has a reputation for his patriotism and contributions to classical poetry.(高分句型二)
We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi and watch dragon boat race on TV,all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Rita,
Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture,I'd like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family.(高分句型一)
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival,falling on the 5th day of the lunar month May.It is set in honor of a distinguished Chinese poet QuYuan,who has a reputation for his patriotism and contributions to classical poetry.(高分句型二)To help you experience the traditional festival,I sincerely hope you can come to my home and join us in our celebration.We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi and watch dragon boat race on TV,all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture.(高分句型三)
I have the confidence that you will have a good time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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5 life lessons you will learn the hard way | |
Be (71)patient to achieve success | ●Time-consuming tasks often bring (72)discouragement to people. ●What successful people have in (73)commonis that they took time to learn and mastered their skill. |
Live your own life | ●Old beliefs have their value,but their being followed (74)blindlysometimes may make people suffer. ●It is not a good idea to abandon what you are (75)interestedin for old beliefs. |
Never ignore the things we get easily | Most people don't (76)treasure/value/cherishwhat they get for nothing,li ke health. |
Take the road by listening to your heart | ●People are usually trying to be like someone else because they are afraid of (77)failure/failing. ●You need to be (78)courageous/braveto listen to your heart before you pay a high price. |
Break the rules sometimes | ●People tend follow rules so that they can (79)avoidmaking things out of order. ●When rules become (80)obstacles/barriersto your goal,you should break them boldly and courageously. |