题目内容
【题目】美国一家公司的一位员工的女儿Katie为了不让爸爸在他生日当天上班,亲自写假条给公司领导Daniel。假设你是Daniel,请给Katie写封回信,内容包括:
1.表示对请求的感动;
2.称赞她爸爸的辛苦劳动;
3.准许她爸爸在9月第一周放假休息。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Katie,
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Yours,
Daniel
【答案】
Dear Katie,
I am glad to receive your letter. In the letter you asked the company to give your father just one day off to celebrate his birthday. I am deeply moved by your thoughtful request.
Your father is an excellent man. He always works very hard, designing many wonderful things for the company and millions of people around the world.
Considering your father’s birthday and his contribution to the company, we will give him the whole first week of September as vacation time.
I hope you will have a great time. Please send my best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Daniel
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达是要求写一封信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、仔细研读题目所给信息,不要误解信息,也不要漏掉要点,明确自己是以哪个身份来写这封信。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构,符合书信口吻和语气。词汇短语丰富,如one day off 一天假,thoughtful考虑周到的。有高级句式,如designing many wonderful things for the company and millions of people around the world.和Considering your father’s birthday and his contribution to the company是非谓语形式。结尾的I hope you will have a great time. Please send my best wishes to your family.
符合书信体的一般问候性结语。