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下面是网友Abe的一条微博内容：It seems that none of my classmates want to be my friends because I'm fat．I feel very lonely in class．I suppose I'll break down(崩溃)someday．假设你是李华，请留言开导他，并适当给出一些建议。

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Dear Abe,

　　Sorry to know that you’re so upset about your overweight．I quite understand what you’re feeling now．

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Dear Abe,

　　Sorry to see that you’re so upset about your overweight．I quite understand what you’re feeling now．Friendship is of great importance to us teenagers, especially when in school．

　　But I don't quite agree that your classmates don't make friends with you simply because you’re fat．I think that it may be your character rather than your figure that has caused the problem．You shouldn't just live in your own world．Instead, try to cheer up a bit and find more chances to join your classmates．For example, play ball games with them as often as you can, which will help you lose weight as well．

I'm sure you will make some friends and become happier soon．

Yours,

Li Hua