Question

8．假设你是李津，日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点如下：
（1）遇到的挑战（语言、交往、文化差异）；
（2）你的收获（日常生活上与学习上）
（3）感谢组织者
注意：
（1）词数不少于120；
（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯．
（3）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear friends，
I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
As we know，the camp is made up of thirty students from several countries．（高分句型一） Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making my self-understood，talking with strangers and dealing with culture shock．（高分句型二） With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．（高分句型三）
That's all．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）遇到的挑战（语言、交往、文化差异）；（2）你的收获（日常生活上与学习上）（3）感谢组织者 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：on behalf of代表；As we know众所周知；However然而；deal with应对；help  out帮助某人度过难关；Not only，but also 不仅，而且；contribute to 致力于；
As we know，the camp is made up of thirty students from several countries．（高分句型一）
However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making my self-understood，talking with strangers and dealing with culture shock．（高分句型二）
So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear friends，
        I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．As we know，the camp is made up of thirty students from several countries．（高分句型一） Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making my self-understood，talking with strangers and dealing with culture shock．（高分句型二） With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people
who contributed to the camp．（高分句型三）
        That's all．Thank you for listening．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．