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3．假定你是天津大学的学生李津．第十三届全运会（the 13th National Games） 将于今年9月在天津举办．现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员．请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：
（1）个人情况：年龄、性别；
（2）个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况；
（3）承诺：提供最佳服务．
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）开头语己为你写好，不计入总词数；
（3）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯．
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Jin．I would like to work as a volunteer for the13th National Games．
I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now．I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely．（高分句型一）
I believe I can do a good job for the Games．First，I like sports and I know the place very well．Second，I get along with others easily，which is especially useful for a volunteer．（高分句型二）Third，I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed．My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）
Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours faithfully，
LiJin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息针对"是否父母应该被允许看你的微信朋友圈"这一话题开展讨论，大家发表了不同的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：work as充当，担任；am good at 擅长；get along with 与…相处；look forward to盼望
I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely．（高分句型一）
Second，I get along with others easily，which is especially useful for a volunteer．（高分句型二）
My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       My name is Li Jin．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 13th National Games．
       I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now．I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely．（高分句型一）
       I believe I can do a good job for the Games．First，I like sports and I know the place very well．Second，I get along with others easily，which is especially useful for a volunteer．（高分句型二）Third，I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed．My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）
       Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Jin

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．