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18．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom给你发来一份电子邮件，表示对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣．他想请你介绍你最喜欢的一个节日，如端午节、中秋节、春节，你通常是怎么庆祝的，以及你喜欢这个节日的原因．请你根据他的问题回复邮件．
提示词语：eat，get together，share，happy，special．
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2．字数：100字左右
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad to hear that…
you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
Best wishes to you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom给你发来一份电子邮件，表示对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣．他想请你介绍你最喜欢的一个节日，如端午节、中秋节、春节，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：你通常是怎么庆祝的，以及你喜欢这个节日的原因  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be interested in对…感兴趣；traditional Chinese festivals中国传统节日；in the shape of 以…的形状；In short总之
On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）
In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）

解答 Hi!Tom，
       I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
       I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
       Best wishes to you．
                                                                
 Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．