Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】删掉in

【2】anything-something

【3】better-best

【4】decide-decided

【5】step-steps

【6】well-good

【7】after-when/while

【8】a-the

【9】just后加to

【10】enjoy-enjoying

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了，我为退休的教练做心爱的饼干，来表达我对他的尊敬。

【1】删掉in考查介词。固定结构，last week前面不能加in，故删掉in。

【2】anything-something考查名词。Anything用于否定句,something 用于肯定句，故这里改成something。

【3】better-best考查最高级。The 后面加形容词的最高级表示“最……”，符合句意，故改为best。

【4】decide-decided考查过去时。整篇文章都是过去发生的故事，应用过去时，故改为decided。

【5】step-steps考查单复数。根据前面的some可知这里需要用复数形式，故改为steps。

【6】well-good考查形容词。这里没有进行比较，故改为good。

【7】after-when/while考查逻辑关系。根据语境，当我在打包的时候有些掉在了地上，这是同时进行的两个动作，故改成when/while。

【8】a-the考查冠词。这里用the表示特指我的教练的退休庆祝宴会，故改为the。

【9】just后加to考查介词。这里加to表示目的，符合句意，故加to>

【10】enjoy-enjoying考查动名词。这里主语我和enjoy构成主动关系，动名词作主语，故改成enjoying。