题目内容
3.第30届夏季奥运会将于2012年7月27日在英国伦敦举行.伦敦奥组委现在面向世界招募志愿者.假设你是李华,是滁州二中的一名高三学生,你有意参加此项活动.请你给奥组委写封信,根据以下要点简要陈述你应聘的理由.1.你的爱好:喜欢体育活动;…
2.你的特长:擅长英语;…
3.你的有利条件:高考(NMET)结束后,你有足够的时间;…
4.其他理由:…
注意:
1.词数120词左右.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
提示词:伦敦奥组委the London Olympic Organizing Committee.
分析 本文属于半开放性作文,对考生的要求较高,要让学生根据所给的范围自行组织词汇要点进行写作,难度稍大,对学生在平时的语言积累要求比较高.在写作时要可以使用一些高级句型如定语从句,非谓语用法;高级词汇如broaden my horizons等,更要注意连词的使用如In addition;Above all,What's more等.
高分句型一 In addition,I am good at spoken English,which makes it possible for me to communicate well with others.(非限制性定语从句)
高分句型二 What's more,I will be free after taking the College Entrance Examination in June,which allows me enough time to serve as a volunteer.(非限制性定语从句)
解答 Dear sir,
I am glad to learn that the London Olympic Organizing Committee needs volunteers from all over the world.I really want to be one of them.
I'm Li Hua,a student from No.2Middle School of Chuzhou.I think I am fit for the volunteering work.Firstly,I am fond of sports,such as playing basketball,table tennis and so on.In addition,I am good at spoken English,which makes it possible for me to communicate well with others.(高分句式一)What's more,I will be free after taking the College Entrance Examination in June,which allows me enough time to serve as a volunteer.(高分句式二)(自我介绍 爱好 特长)
Above all,being a volunteer of the Olympics will be a meaningful experience in my life and it will be a good chance for me to make new friends and broaden my horizons.So I hope you can give me a chance.(总结并提出希望)
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly.
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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