题目内容
【题目】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(__),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn't have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back to home to get it.Fortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen anywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in front of me! I couldn't believe my luck - not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name in my shirt!
【答案】
【1】make改为making
【2】actor改为actors
【3】but改为and或者so
【4】去掉home前面的to
【5】Fortunately改为Unfortunately
【6】have改为had
【7】disappointing改为disappointed
【8】out后加of
【9】had改为have
【10】in改为 on
【解析】短文改错
【1】make改为making;I came across a crew…此句中的谓语动词是come across,所以make要变为非谓形式,非谓语动词表主动应在动词后加ing,故make改为making.
考点定位:现在分词
【2】actor改为actors;one of… ……其中之一,后面的名词要用复数形式。故actor改为actors
考点定位:名词
【3】but改为and或者so;I didn't have my camera with me at that time,…I rushed back to home get it.(那时我没有带相机,所以,我飞奔着回家去拿)这两个句子之间是顺承关系而非转折关系,连接词不用but而用so。故but改为and或者so.
考点定位:连词/连接词
【4】去掉home前面的to;rush back to…冲回…; home是一个副词,前面不能有介词to,故去掉home前面的to.
考点定位:介词/介词短语
【5】Fortunately改为Unfortunately ;根据下文:by the time I got back,they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen anywhere(等到我回来的时候,他们已经完成场景拍摄,演员们都走了),所以,应该是“不幸地”,故Fortunately改为Unfortunately.
考点定位:副词/比较等级
【6】have改为had; Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene…(当我回来的时候,他们已经拍完了),“当我回来的时候”这个动作是过去时,而“他们已经拍完了”是过去的过去,所以要用过去完成时,故have改为had.
考点定位:时态和语态
【7】disappointing改为disappointed;“我”感到很失望,disappointing是来形容事情令人失望,disappointed用来形容人的心情很失望,故disappointing改为disappointed.
考点定位:过去分词
【8】out后加of;walk out 走出,后面接地点的时候要加介词of,故out后加of.
考点定位:介词/介词短语
【9】had改为have;not only did I… not only后面的句子要用倒装,倒装时将助动词提到主语前,主语后面的动词要用原形,故 had改为have.
考点定位:倒装与省略
【10】in改为 on;signed his name in my shirt(在T恤上签名),在…上…用on,故in改为 on.