题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华,是校报的英语小记者。校报英语园地本期的话题是Festivals and Holidays。你打算以My Favorite Festival为题进行演讲,请根据写作提纲,介绍你最喜欢的传统节日——春节。
内容包括:1. 春节的重要性;2. 主要庆祝活动; 3. 你喜欢的原因。
注意:字数100字左右。
参考词汇:对联couplet 压岁钱lucky money
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【答案】My Favorite Festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, we clean up our houses and put up red couplets to welcome the New Year. The parks and squares are decorated with red lanterns, balloons and flowers. Dragon dances are played in the street. It brings a festive atmosphere to the city. What I like most is to go shopping with our parents and buy all kinds of delicious food. We can meet and play with other children.
I like the Spring Festival mainly because I can get a lot of lucky money from the relatives, so it is the happiest time of the year.
【解析】试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,结合提示,用英语写一篇My Favorite Festival为题进行演,介绍你最喜欢的传统节日——春节。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如What I like most 是主语从句。 because I can get a lot of lucky money from the relatives,.是原因状语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语 clean up , put up , be decorated with, play with等。连词so的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。