Question

【题目】你校学生会决定举办一场以“我有一个梦想”为主题的演讲比赛。作为即将上大学的高三学生，请你根据提示写一篇包含一下内容的演讲稿。

1.你的梦想 2.说明理由 3.如何实现

注意：1.可根据内容适当发挥

2.文中不得使用真实校名和人名

3.词数：120左右

4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

I have a dream

Dear fellow students,

I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you here.

That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a dream

Dear fellow students,

I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you here. It has always my best wish to be a teacher. I still remember how I was taught to spell my first word. I never forget how I was encouraged to raise new hope when in despair. My road to maturity is dotted with guidance from teachers, without which it would have been impossible for me to smooth away the difficulties and discomforts. What the teachers do and say influences me so much that the dream of becoming a teacher has been deeply rooted in my mind.

As the saying goes, teachers are engineers of human soul. Being a teacher demands a lot, including rich knowledge, patience, kindness, devotion, etc. I’ve made up my mind to major in education after graduation from high school. Therefore, I’m going to work hard, train my character and develop good qualities. I believe I’ll realize the dream through my constant efforts.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：英语演讲稿是近年来比较喜欢出现在在英语书面表达中的一种形式，遇到演讲稿这类作文题，认真研究所给提纲不能遗漏提纲要点，更不能错误理解提纲的意思。确定各段的主题句，主题句结构要完整，即结构符合语法规则；意义要完整，即主题句是一个符合逻辑的完整句子。段落写作应围绕自己列好的主题句进行，在写作过程中可稍加调整。要符合演讲的语气，要注意动词的时态及主语的人称。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be encouraged to do 被鼓励做某事；make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做某事；realize the dream实现梦想；I never forget how I was encouraged to raise new hope when in despair这个句子how引导forget的宾语从句；As the saying goes, teachers are engineers of human soul这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句；My road to maturity is dotted with guidance from teachers, without which it would have been impossible for me to smooth away the difficulties and discomforts这个句子without which引导定语从句；