Question

【题目】升入高中，离开了以前的老师，又结识了很多新老师。请你选择一位自己最喜欢的老师介绍给大家，要点包括：

1.外贸性格； 2.教学特色； 3.你的评价。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My Favourite Teacher

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Answer 1

【答案】My Favourite Teacher

I have many teachers in my life, but Mr. Wang, my present teacher, is my favourite.

Mr. Wang is tall and thin, looking about 40 years old. He is always so kind to us students, just like our father. He has different ways of teaching in class, so we find his class lively and interesting. He always encourages us to speak English in class and never be afraid of making mistakes. Thanks to his excellent teaching, I have made rapid progress in my English.

Mr. Wang is such a good teacher that we all respect him very much. In fact, he is considered as one of the most popular teachers in my school.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式作文，请你选择一位自己最喜欢的老师介绍给大家，要点包括：外贸性格；教学特色；你的评价。首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，内容齐全，格式正确，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。Mr. Wang is tall and thin, looking about 40 years old.现在分词做伴随状态；Mr. Wang is such a good teacher that we all respect him very much.句中使用ｓｕｃｈ―――ｔｈａｔ引导结果状语从句；另外，ｂｕｔ／ｓｏ引导的并列句，Thanks to his excellent teaching, made rapid progress， In fact,的运用为文章增色添彩。