题目内容
20.寒假就要到了,你的美国笔友Mike来信谈到将在寒假中去旅游,请根据下面表格中的提示给他回信.旅游的好处 | 可以亲近大自然、结识新朋友等 |
旅行前的准备 | 规划好路线、了解天气等 |
旅游的注意事项 | 结伴而行,可相互照顾 |
2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3)可根据提示适当发挥使行文连贯.
Dear Mike,
Glad to hear you choose to travel during the winter vacation.I also like traveling.
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Have pleasant journey!
Li Hua.
分析 本文是写一封回信.回信要点已经在表格中罗列清楚,写作时务必涵盖所有要点,不得有遗漏.既然是谈论假期安排,故本文时态应以一般将来时为主.写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型,注意行文的连贯和逻辑性.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:get close to靠近,接近;broaden our horizon拓展视野;make more new friends结交更多新朋友;What's more而且;ahead of time提前;look after 照顾,照料;in time of trouble处于麻烦
解答 Dear Mike,
Glad to hear you choose to travel during the winter vacation.I also like traveling.Here is what I'd like to say about traveling.Traveling benefits us quite a lot.When we travel around,we'll get close to nature and broaden our horizon.(高分句型)We might meet many interesting things and people,helping us make more new friends there.(高分句型)We'd better think about what places to visit and decide a proper route before traveling.What's more,it is very necessary for us to know about the weather there ahead of time,which helps us have more fun.(高分句型)It's wise to travel together with our friends or with a tourist team,because we can learn to look after each other,especially in time of trouble,feeling safer and more satisfied.(高分句型)Have pleasant journey!
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

People who fail in school may feel"stupid",but emotional or mental health problems and"hidden"learning disorders,not low intelligence,often are the root causes of their inability to meet the standards of a school.The following are some factors that can lead to school failure.
Depression is one of the most common causes of school difficulties.It is a condition that makes people trapped in low spirits for long periods of time,have less energy,and lose interest in studies that normally give them pleasure.
Anxiety is a feeling of excessive worry about a possible danger or an uncomfortable situation that is intense enough to interfere with(妨碍)a person's ability to concentrate and focus.
Students also may bring their problems at home to school with them.If a student's family is experiencing violence,unemployment,or any other upsetting situation,it can be ifficult for him to concentrate on schoolwork.Many students who are having family problems might have trouble controlling their anger and frustration at school,and they may end up in trouble because of their behavior.
Learning disorders are conditions that interfere with gaining specific academic skills,such as reading or writing.Learning disorders can damage a person's ability to process or remember information.
Students at risk of school failure need to be identified as early as possible in their school careers if they are to receive the help they need.This task usually falls to the teachers and parents.Parents can help by taking a genuine interest in their children's school life and attending school events.They should take seriously sudden changes in their children's behavior,sleeping,or eating.Besides,they should help their child identify what he or she is bad at or good at.
On the other hand,there are a lot of things teachers can do to help those students who fail in school.For example,they can develop learning plans that support the students'strengths,carry out evaluations about their possible learning disabilities,support their learning by teaching them how to study,and encourage them to participate in school activities,such as sports,plays,or clubs,so that they feel they are a part of the school.
School failure
●The concept of school failure School failure refers to a process where a student falls behind others and becomes gradually (66)disconnected/separated from the educational system. ●It can result in a student (67)leaving school early at last. ●School failure is commonly caused by students'inability or unwillingness to use their intelligence. ●The(68)factors leading to school failure Some students feel depressed,thus becoming less (69)energetic and less interested in studies. ●Some students can't keep (70)concentrating/concentrated/focusing/focused on studies due to their anxiety. ●Many students with family problems might have trouble at school. ●Learning disorders can make students unable to perform well (71)academically. ●Tips for parents Show your (72)concernabout your child's school life. ●Don't (73)ignore sudden changes in the child's behavior,sleeping or eating. ●Help to identify the child's weaknesses and strengths. ●Tips for teachers Develop learning plans to support the students'strengths. ●(74)Evaluatethe students'possible learning disabilities. ●Teach study skills to support the students'learning. ●Involve the students in school activities to make them have a sense of(75)belonging. |

1.Be nice to yourself.
The first step to become a friend to yourself is to treat yourself the way you treat a friend.This means that you need to stop being self-critical(自我批评的).Start by knowing your good qualities,talents and abilities and begin to appreciate your own unique self.
2.Imagine how you would support a friend in the same situation.
Think about a loved one,a friend,a family member,someone dear to you and imagine that they are in the same situation you are now facing.Think about how they're struggling,suffering with this problem,then consider how to best offer help and advice to them.Think about the words that you would say to your greatest friend and then say them gently to yourself.Allow yourself to feel supported,and give yourself what you need.
3.Honor your needs.
Having considered how you would help a dear friend,you need to start taking your own advice and putting your own needs first.Do you need a day off from work?A long hot bath?Whatever it is that you need,allow yourself to put it at the top of the list rather than the bottom.
Use these skills,you will become your own best friend and start being there for yourself.
(71)How to be your own best friend?
(72)Benefits | ☆Creating your own internal support system ☆(73)givingourselves what we need ☆Knowing how to(74)be supported in times of need |
Skills | ☆Be nice to yourself. Treat yourself the way you treat a friend. Appreciate your good qualities,(75)uniquely. ☆Imagine how you would support a friend in the same situation. Consider how to best help and(76)advise them. Allow yourself to (77)be supported,and give yourself what you need. ☆(78)Honor your needs. Taking your own advice and putting your own needs (79)ahead of the list rather than the bottom |
(80)Conclusion | Become your own best friend and start being there for yourself! |
赞成 | 反对 | 你的看法 |
中国学生应该重视传统节日,积极参与传统节日活动,弘扬传统文化. | 举办圣诞节活动可以帮助学生了解西方文化,学习西方文明;创造交流、放松的机会,缓解学习压力. | … |
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Before last Christmas,some schools forbade students to hold any Christmas-themed activity or celebration,which caused different opinions on the decision among students.(高分句型) Some are in favor of it because they think that,as Chinese students,they should attach much importance to traditional festivals and take an active part in traditional festival activities to carry forward the traditional culture.(高分句型)(赞成观点) However,other students are against the decision,believing that holding Christmas celebration helps Chinese teenagers have a better understanding of western cultures and learn about western civilization.(高分句型)In addition,it provides a good chance for the students to communicate with each other and relax themselves,which will reduce study pressure.(高分句型)(反对观点)Personally speaking,I think students can choose to celebrate the festivals they like,whether it is a western one or a traditional one.(高分句型)(个人观点).
- Many people came to hug me.( )
A. | That's fight | B. | I'm not sure | ||
C. | Perfect! | D. | Don't mention it |