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3．据报道，今后我国中小学生在寒假、暑假之外，还有望享受春假和秋假．很多学生会利用假期外出旅行，请向外出旅行的学生推荐你最倾向的一至两种出行方式，并简要说明理由．要求：120词左右（不包括已给出部分）．
It's reported that Chinese primary and junior school students can hopefully enjoy spring and autumn holidays in the near future．
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
What's more，riding among bicyclists is not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience''一更重要的是，骑在自行车不仅是一种不寻常的享受，也是一种环保的经验．
运用了not only…but also 句型
高分句型二：
Although less comfortable，the bus is cheaper and more convenient．
虽然不太舒服，但公交车更便宜更方便．
解答 It's reported that Chinese primary and middle school students can hopefully enjoy spring and autumn holidays in the near future．Many of them will choose to go for a short trip to get refreshed．First and foremost，I would recommend riding a bicycle．A bicycle is far cheaper than other major means of transportation．When you ride with your family or friends，you can enjoy more flexibility and freedom．What's more，riding among bicyclists is not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience（高分句型一）．
If you go a little bit farther，I would like you to choose to use public transportation，like taking a bus．Although less comfortable，the bus is cheaper and more convenient（高分句型二）．Besides，you don't have to take the trouble of caring for it．The only disadvantage is that it might take you a few moments to wait in line sometimes．
点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．
At least 4，000 years ago，the anci ent Egyptians and Babylonians marked the changing of the year．In Egypt，the year started when the Nile River flooded，enriching farmers'fields．This happened at the end of September．
The Babylonians held a festival in the spring，on March 23，to kick off the next farming cycle．The Babylonian celebration lasted for 11 days．
The date January 1 wa s picked by the Roman Emperor Julius Caesar as the change of the year when he established his own calendar in 46 BC．The month of January originates from the Roman god，Janus．He is pictured with two heads．One head looks forward and the other back．They represent a break between the old and new．The new calendar was in time with the sun and it has been used until the present day．
In Vietnam，the New Year holiday happens in February．They buy fresh flowers and a peach blossom to put in their house，following the Vietnamese custom．
Thailand has its specific New Year's date； it's different from the normal calendar．The Thai New Year is celebrated on April 13．On this day，Thai people play with water，throwing it on each other．It is intended to bring good luck during the New Year ahead．
In China，the more favorable New Year is usually celebrated in February according to lunar calendar （阴历）．On New Year's Eve，all family members sit together at table，enjoying lots of auspicious foods such as dumplings，chicken to bring good luck．
Title：New Year traditions all around the world
| Countries | （66）Dates/Time | Origins（起源）or activities | Meanings or reasons |
| Egypt | the end of September | the Nile River flood | make fields （67）rich |
| Babylon | March 23 | holding a （68）festival/celebration | kick off the next farming cycle |
| Rome | January 1 | Roman god，Janus | （69）representa break |
| （70）Thailand | April 13 | （71）pouring/throwingwater onto each other's body | bring good luck |
| Vietnam | （72）February | buying fresh flowers and a peach blossom | （73）followthe custom |
| China | February | （74）enjoyingauspicious foods | bring good luck and （75）happinessto everyone |