Question

8．假如你是李华，你在英国的笔友上周来信说自己性格内向，不善与人沟通相处．并为此苦恼不已，请你以此为话题给他写一封回信安慰他．
注 意：1．词数100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
 I'm glad to have received the letter you sent me last week．
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      Best wishes to you!
   Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点句型一：As to your question in your letter，I'd like to tell you it's very common for us students of middle school．关于你在信中的问题，我想告诉你，对我们中学生来说，这是很常见的．这是一个含有宾语从句的句子，句子 it's very common for us students of middle school是tell的宾语从句，从句省略的连接词that．
亮点句型二：Only in the way can your friends understand you more．只有这样，你的朋友才能更了解你．这是一个倒装句，only in the way 引导的方式状语置于句首，主句做部分倒装．

解答 Dear Jim，
     I'm glad to have received the letter you sent me last week．
     As to your question in your letter，I'd like to tell you it's very common for us students of middle school．（亮点句型一）I suffered from the same problem  at one time．Therefore，you don't have to worry about it too much．If you want to make a difference，you can do the following things：
     Most important of all，you should try to communicate more with your friends and teachers actively to throw light on what you think of．Only in the way can your friends understand you more．（亮点句型二）And you can talk about what others care about and the things and persons they are interested in．Besides，helping others is of great importance for you，for others can be kind to you if you are friendly to them．【提供建议】
     Best wishes to you!
                                                                                               Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．