Question

【题目】短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was the am completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday on evening.

My favorite sport is playing basketball. In the middle school, I joined in the basketball team.

All the teammate practised hard after school. Once our team had match against another school’s.

At the very beginning, we were so nervous which we couldn’t cooperate very good, because thiswas the first time for us to compete with the school honor. In the half match they fell behind. Our team leader calls us together and said that we must get uniting in order to beat them. Then we tried our best and won the game at last. Play basketball makes me realize the importance of union and teamwork.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉in

【2】teammate → teammates

【3】had后加a

【4】which→ that

【5】good → well

【6】with → for

【7】they →we

【8】calls →called

【9】uniting → united

【10】play → playing

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了“我”最喜爱的运动是打篮球。在初中时，“我”参加了篮球队。在一次比赛中，刚开始，我们都十分紧张，因为这时第一次为了学校的荣耀而打比赛。随后，队长建议我们应该团结一心打败对手。最后，团队合作让我们队取得了胜利。

【1】去掉in考察动词。Join表示加入某个党派或社会团体，从而成为该党派或团体的一员，参加某一团体、组织、机构,并作为其中一员，join in指的是参加某项运动或活动，例如参加讨论、游行、罢工等。句中我参加篮球队，属于参加团体，故将in去掉。

【2】teammate → teammates考察名词。这里指每一个队员，故将teammate后加s。

【3】had后加a考察不定冠词。 a与抽象名词连用时，指单一的、任何一个。固定搭配have a match with和…有一场比赛。故had后加a。

【4】which→ that考察连词。So…that为固定句式，太…以致于。故将which改为that。

【5】good → well考察副词。副词well修饰动词cooperate，故将good改为well。

【6】with → for考察介词。Compete with sb.与某人竞争，compete for为了…而去竞争，在此句中表示为了学校的荣耀而竞争，故将with 改为for.

【7】they →we考察人称代词。由下文we must get uniting in order to beat them.可知我们队落后了，队长将队员们聚集在一起，并且说团结一心才能战胜对手，故将they改为we.

【8】calls →called考察动词。文章时态为一般过去时，故将calls改为called。

【9】uniting → united考察形容词。Get united使大家团结起来，故将uniting 改为 united。

【10】play → playing考察动词。现在分词短语做主语，故将play改为playing。