题目内容
15.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
I will share with you true story that happened a couple of day ago.One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks from a food store.A few classmates were then inviting to enjoy the snacks.Unluckily,all of us got poisoned and had stomachaches with their faces pale.They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital.Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine.They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine.This accident makes us to realize the seriousness of the food safe problem.Therefore,I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to it.
分析 本文主要讲述作者的一个同学买了一包点心,邀请几个同学分食.不幸的是,他们都中毒了.他们很快地被送到了附近的医院,在医生检查后,给了他们一些药.他们吃药之后很快脱离了危险.这件事使我们认识到食品安全的重要性.
解答 I will share with you∧true story that happened a couple of day ago.One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks from a food store.A few classmates were then inviting to enjoy the snacks.Unluckily,all of us got poisoned and had stomachaches with their faces pale.They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital.Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine.They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine.This accident makes us to realize the seriousness of the food safe problem.Therefore,I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to it.
详解:
1.加a 考查不定冠词. story是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
2.day改为days 考查名词复数.day是可数名词,其前有a couple of修饰时用复数形式.
3.inviting改为invited 考查动词语态.A few classmates与invite之间是动宾关系,要用一般过去时的被动语态.
4.us改为them 考查代词.them指代前文中的A few classmates.
5.but改为and 考查连词.examined them和gave them some medicine表示动作的先后,用连词and.
6.before改为after 考查介词.根据句意:他们吃药之后很快脱离了危险.用介词after.
7.去掉to 考查词语用法.make后接动词不定式时要去掉不定式符号to,即用动词原形.
8.safe改为safety 考查名词."食品安全问题"用英语表达应是:food safety problem.
9.strong改为strongly 考查副词.suggest是动词,要用副词修饰.
10.pays改为pay 考查虚拟语气.suggest后接宾语从句时,从句中的谓语动词用should+动词原形,should可省略.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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