题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华,在感恩节即将到来之际,你校组织了以“What shall we do to thank our parents?”为主题的英语演讲活动。
请你根据自己的亲身体会并结合现实生活,写一篇100词左右的英语演讲稿。
【答案】
Good afternoon!
My name is Li Hua. As Thanksgiving is drawing near, I’d like to express our gratitude for the energy and time our parents have devoted to us.
As is known to all, great patience and perseverance are needed to bring up a child. We couldn’t have grown up without the parents’ care and love. They always do whatever they can to help us make progress. I can feel my parents’ deep love for me, which motivates me to make greater progress.
I think there are a lot of things we can do to show our gratitude towards them. For example, we can cook a meal for them. Besides, we can help them with some housework. More importantly, we should tell them we are thankful for what they have done for us and we won’t let them down
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇发言稿,所以在语言的使用上要大众化,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容,需要注意不要偏离文章中心。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语bring up抚养;make progress取得进步;be thankful fo因。。感激;As is known to all, great patience and perseverance are needed to bring up a child.这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句;I think there are a lot of things we can do to show our gratitude towards them这个句子运用个定语从句和不定式做状语;More importantly, we should tell them we are thankful for what they have done for us and we won’t let them down这个句子中what引导宾语从句;