题目内容
【题目】 假定你是李华,暑假你参加了英国游学活动,住在房东Mary家中,回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢,要点如下:
1.安全抵家
2.回顾英国游学体会
3.感谢房东的帮助
4.附寄两张合影
5.表达愿望
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mary
I’ve com back home safely. Looking back to my stay in Britain,I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot. I also benefited a lot form learning together with local students. M ore importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there. So I’m so grateful to you.
By the way ,attached to the letter are two photos taken with you,which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.
You are expected to come to China soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语impress sb给某人留下印象;adapt to 适应;be expected to do 期望着做某事;By the way顺便;By the way ,attached to the letter are two photos taken with you,which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together这个句子which引导photo的定语从句,we spent together是the happy time的定语从句;