题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华, Chris是你校的国际交流生。一年一度的高考升学季来临了,他作为口语辅导小老师受某刚被录取到北大的学生及其家人邀请,到他们家做客。但是,由于他不知道去中国人家里做客有哪些习俗,便给你发了一封电子邮件,请你根据下列要点,给他回复一封电子邮件,给他一些建议。要点如下:
1.到达时间；2.适当送一些礼物；3.介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1.词数100左右(文章开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I have received your email of July 28. I am happy to hear that you, as a tutor of the graduate admitted to Beijing University this year, were invited to dinner at his home.
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I do wish your first Chinese home dinner an unforgettable experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I have received your email of July 28. I am happy to hear that you, as a tutor of the graduate admitted to Beijing University this year, were invited to dinner at his home. In response to your concerns about how to be a guest in China, I'd like to offer my personal advice.
Firstly, you'd better arrive a little earlier than the expected dinner time to save more time for the graduate's family to prepare dinner. Secondly, gifts like a book or a pen are acceptable. If possible, you can also send him a “red packet” containing 666 RMB meaning “successful in everything”. Moreover, we Chinese often treat guests with delicious dishes. When at table, you shouldn't start eating first but follow the host or the senior guests. Sometimes, the host will help you to some dishes, and you can just show your appreciation and gladly have them, which will please them all.
I do wish your first Chinese home dinner an unforgettable experience.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步：审题。要求考生以李华的身份写邮件，Chris是你校的国际交流生。一年一度的高考升学季来临了,他作为口语辅导小老师受某刚被录取到北大的学生及其家人邀请,到他们家做客。但是,由于他不知道去中国人家里做客有哪些习俗,便给你发了一封电子邮件,请你根据下列要点,给他回复一封电子邮件,给他一些建议。时态应为一般现在时为主。
第2步：确定要点：1.到达时间；2.适当送一些礼物；3.介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇，如be admitted to, in response to；使用了非谓语动词containing 666 RMB meaning “successful in everything”...文章中使用了较多的串联词，如firstly，secondly，moreover；这些串联词有机地把各要点串联成一个整体。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
