Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday I witness a traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went a loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】witness→witnessed

【2】while→when

【3】去掉far

【4】bad→badly

【5】trap→trapped

【6】on→in

【7】As→It

【8】在eager后加to

【9】safe→safety

【10】them→themselves

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了上周作者在回家的路上目睹的一次交通事故。

【1】witness→witnessed 考查时态。这里时间状语是Last Sunday，用过去时。

【2】while→when 考查连词。这里用的是sb. was doing sth. when...意为“某人正在做某事这时突然……”，这里when是并列连词，意为“这时突然”。

【3】去掉far 考查固定表达。这里有明确的表示距离的词away，所以不能用far。

【4】bad→badly 考查词性的正确运用。只有副词才能修饰形容词，形容词不能修饰形容词。

【5】trap→trapped 考查非谓语动词。这里表示“两个司机被困在出租车里”，故用过去分词表被动。

【6】on→in 考查介词搭配。on time意为“按时”；in time意为“及时”。这里表示及时被救出来，故on改为in。

【7】As→It 考查从句。这里that引导的是主语从句，故用it作形式主语。As一般引导定语和状语从句。

【8】在eager后加to 考查固定搭配。be eager to do意为“渴望做某事”。

【9】safe→safety 句意：其他人和他们的安全。此处作宾语用名词形式，故把safe改为名词形式safety。

【10】them→themselves 考查代词。这里指“那些司机对他人及自己的安全缺乏考虑”，故用反身代词作宾语。

【知识归纳】

when后的从句谓语动词既可是延续性动词,也可是短暂性动词,而且还可作并列连词,译为“这时”。但以下句型一定用when作并列连词：

句型A：be about to do…when…正要做…这时(发生另一事)

句型B：was/were doing…when…正在…这时(发生另一事)

句型C：had done…when…刚要做…这时(发生另一事)

1.We were about to set out when it began to rain.我们刚要出发天突然下雨了.

2.He had hardly sat down when his mobile rang.他刚一坐下手机就响了.

3.I was walking along the bank of the river when I fell into it.我正沿河岸散步突然掉进水里.