题目内容
【题目】你是高一年级的张洋,你的外教Anne打算暑假期间在四川旅游,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐两个旅游目的地,并分别阐述理由;
2.感谢他一年来的教学;
3.期待下期的学习。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning to trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. ___________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
【答案】Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning a trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. It’s my pleasure to offer you my suggestions. Among the numerous scenic spots, the first choice is Qingcheng Mountain, which is always on the top of the must-go destinations. It is the gorgeous natural scenery that attracts visitors from home and abroad. Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu, where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history. Good luck to your trip.
By the way, many thanks for teaching us during the past months. Through your international understanding courses, we not only develop our English abilities, but also have a better view of our world.
Look forward to attending your classes next term and enjoying greater progress. (112 words)
Beast wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
【解析】试题分析:本次作文要求给外教Anne写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.推荐两个旅游目的地,并分别阐述理由;2.感谢他一年来的教学;3.期待下期的学习。注意写作时信中内容要点要全面,层次要清晰,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写,认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了定语从句which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.和where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.等。