Question

【题目】学校将于下周推广使用新学生卡。请你从学校的角度就相关事宜写一篇文章。要求如下：

1. 新卡主要优点：方便，快捷；校内支付功能；

2. 使用方法：下载安装应用程序；

3. 信息反馈、求助方式：致电87654321或咨询校财务办公室。

注意：

1. 词数100左右(开头不计入内)；

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

参考词汇:校财务办公室: the School Accounting Office

We’d like to make a brief introduction to ___________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

We’d like to make a brief introduction to the new student card to be issued in our school next week. As a new generation of electronic card, it offers faster and more convenient service. In addition to the basic functions as a common student card, it also serves as a perfect way for your daily school payment.

Just download the application (App) from your cellphone or via a computer, and you will find detailed information on how to use your new student card.

We appreciate your valuable feedback and we will do our utmost to improve our service. Should you run into any problem, please contact 87654321, or go to the school Accounting Office which stays open on weekdays.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，成文时要注意：文章的内容要点要齐全；注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

亮点说明：本文采用三段式，语言简练，内容齐全，结构严谨，布局合理，文中使用高级句子。We’d like to make a brief introduction to the new student card to be issued in our school next week.动词不定式一般式的被动式作后置定语；In addition to the basic functions as a common student card,使用高级词组；Should you run into any problem, please contact 87654321,省略if，把should提前的虚拟语气；or go to the school Accounting Office which stays open on weekdays.句中运用非限制性定语从句。