Question

【题目】假定你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的行为，请用英文给校长写一封信，100个词左右。1. 说明写信的目的。2.对这些行为提出批评。3.提出建议。

提示：随意涂写scribble（n.& v.）乱丢垃圾litter（n.&v.）批评 criticize(v.)

Dear Mr. Headmaster，

I am Li Hua, a student fromClass One,SeniorTwo._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Headmaster，

I am Li Hua, a student from class one, senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students ： littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.

I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是有感于校园中存在的随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的行为。1. 说明写信的目的。2.对这些行为提出批评。3.提出建议。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，采用一般现在时态，内容齐全，结构布局合理，同时句中使用高级句子。a student from class one, senior II.是同位语；I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. Whenever引导时间状语从句；I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior.if引导宾语从句；students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.含情态动词的被动语态用在句中；另外，高级词汇、短语draw your attention to，does harm to，feel ashamed，At the same time,等的运用为文章增色添彩。