题目内容
【题目】假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李明。你校将于7月28日接待来自英国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排其在沈阳的一日活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动计划并简要说明理由,最后征求对方意见。
上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等);
中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等);
下午与我校学生游览故宫。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
提示词汇:故宫---Forbidden City
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li MIng, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. I am glad to hear that you and your School Delegation will visit our school and our city. I’ll be responsible for your one-day tour in Shenyang on behalf of our school. The following are our arrangements for you.
There will be a meeting to talk about our rich and colorful campus life, including sports and art, in the morning. After that, we will discuss the cultural differences between our two countries. I am sure we’ll learn a lot from each other. At noon, you’ll share lunch with the students in our school. You can enjoy the delicious Chinese dumplings and noodles. In the afternoon, we’ll go sightseeing the Forbidden Ciyt . I believe you will have a good time and be attracted by the beautiful scenery.
I wonder if you are satisfied with the schedule. If not, please e-mail me. We will make changes. Look forward to your early arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析:完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有知识要点;应用了较多语法结构和词汇;语法结构和段落都很好,尽力使用复杂结构和高级词汇;具备较强的语言运用能力;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑;完全达到了预期的写作目的。
【亮点】文章用了书信应该用的格式,用了三段式的形式,分点写出内容,把文章所需要的东西都一一写出,短语等运用的非常好。虽然没有用过多华丽的词语,但是写的很朴实,没有过多的雕饰。运用了第一人称,很好的写出了文章的要点。运用了定语从句等多种从句,还用了很多复合句,条理清晰,很符合题意,词数也正好在要求的区间内。