Question

【题目】假设你是李华，请根据下面的提示写一封信给一家艺术博物馆的委员，建议建一个艺术馆，在信中提出你的理由并请求许可。

注意：词数120左右

art gallery 艺术馆 artists 艺术家

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Committee members:

I did a survey among people and we think it is very important and necessary to start a new art gallery for our district. So I am writing to ask you to help us to do that I have discovered that we have many good artists in our district. We have many painters, both modern and traditional, somesculptors and a few excellent potters. We also have a group of people who meet regularly to practice traditional folk art. At present, none of these groups have a place to display their works. The gallery would provide such a place and would help people in the district to learn more about art and our artists.

In conclusion, I believe a gallery of local art and craft would not only encourage the artists and but also makes others proud of our local talent. Moreover, it provides a good place for students to learn and appreciate art. I do hope you will consider my suggestion.

Yours faithfully/sincerely/truly,

【解析】本文是一篇建议信。根据提示给一家艺术博物馆的委员写一封信，建议建一个艺术馆。在信中提出你的理由并请求许可。本文提出的理由充分，语气中肯礼貌。段落层次清晰，行文连贯，要点齐全，言简意赅，目的明确，较具有说服力。还使用一些连词，让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句，使文章更加生动而流畅，这些都体现了驾驭语言的能力。具体如下：

复杂句：I am writing to ask you to help us to do that I have discovered that we have many good artists in our district.

定语从句：W e also have a group of people who meet regularly to practice traditional folk art.

名词从句；I believe a gallery of local art and craft would not only encourage the artists and but also makes others proud of our local talent.

we think it is very important and necessary to start a new art gallery for our district

强调：I do hope you will consider my suggestion.