Question

【题目】短文改错。

Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we are little kids. What we can learn from the story is we must be honest. Therefore, there’re lots of phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.

Being honest does great harm not only to other people and also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drinking this kind of milk, the baby had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. To my great relief, the producers got accused and punished net all the serious consequences in the end.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Are→were

【2】连词that不能省

【3】Therefore→However

【4】Phenomenon→phenomenons

【5】dishonesty→dishonst

【6】also→but also

【7】for an example→for example

【8】baby→babies

【9】what→which

【10】my→our

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】根据主句动词heard的时态可知,将are改为were。

【2】^ we must be honest是表语从句，其连词that不能省。

【3】根据上下文可知，前后两句语义转折非因果，因而改Therefore为However。

【4】phenomenon是可数名词，在lots of后应是复数形式。

【5】根据句意可知，此处应是dishonst才合乎文意。

【6】not only…but also 是固定搭配。

【7】take…for example是固定搭配，不用冠词。

【8】此处根据the baby had big heads的heads可知一部分是babies。

【9】what badly affected their health是非限制性定语从句，因此，改what为which。

【10】To one’s great relief“某人大为欣喜的是”根据上下文可知应是复数，因此改my为our。