Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This morning my friend Mary and me went shopping. She thought it is a good chance to practice Chinese. Mary was happy to talk to the salesgirls, and so did they. She wanted to buy some chicken, so she asked for a salesgirl, “ How much is the cock?” Gentle, the salesgirl answered, “ I’m not sure whether it’s a cock or a hen.” Mary became embarrassing and realized she had made a mistake. All of us laughed include Mary. Then we went to buy some eggs. I asked Mary, “ Do you want buy hens’ sons and daughters?” Mary shouted, “ I can say eggs.” We laughed again. How an interesting shopping experience!

Answer 1

【答案】1.第一行 me改为I

2.is 改为was

3.第二行 did改为were

4.第三行 for去掉

5.第四行 Gentle改为Gently

6.第五行 embarrassing改为embarrassed

7.第六行 include 改为including

8.want和buy之间加to

9.第七行 and改为or

10.How改为What

【解析】1.考查代词。句意：今天上午，我的朋友Mary和我一起去购物。此句“Mary和我”是并列的主语，用主格， 故me—I。

2.考查时态。句意：她认为这是练习汉语的好机会。根据第一句时间状语this morning可知文章介绍过去的事情，用一般过去时，故is –was。

3.句意：Mary和售货员交谈的很开心，售货员们也很开心。本句使用的是so引导的部分倒装，完整句子是Mary was happy to talk to the salesgirls, and they were very happy too.，倒装结构为“so were they”,故did—were。

4.句意：她想买点鸡肉，因此她问一位售货员……ask 是及物动词，可以直接跟sb做宾语，故去掉for。

5.考查副词。这里的意思是“售货员温柔地回答”。需要用副词修饰动词answer，故Gentle—Gently。

6.考查形容词词义。句意：觉得很尴尬，意识到她犯错了。embarrassing是指一种东西,一件事情,或一种状况令人觉得尴尬；embarrassed是指某人觉得很尴尬。根据句意可知embarrassing—embarrassed。

7.考查介词。句意：我们都笑了，包括Mary 。根据句意可知，这里用介词including表示“包括”，故include –including。

8.句意：我问Mary：“你想买母鸡的儿子或者女儿吗”？want to do想做。故want和buy之间加to。

9.考查介词。句意：我问Mary：“你想买母鸡的儿子或者女儿吗”？根据句意可知这里是选择关系，用or，故and--or。

10.考查感叹句。句意：多么有趣的经历啊！这里experience 是名词，用what引导感叹句，故How—What。