Question

【题目】随着科技的发展，iPad已经成为学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐、阅读电子书，又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给你校长写一封信，谈谈你对你校学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容包括以下几点：

1．使用iPad对学生学习产生的好处。

2．使用iPad对学生产生的负面影响。

3．提出自己的建议并简要说明理由。

注意：词数120词左右。

Dear Sir，

My name is Li Hua．I am writing to show my concern about the effects of modern media on us students．

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

My_name_is_Li_Hua.I_am_writing_to_show_my_concern_about_the_effects_of_modern_media_on_us_students．

Nowadays，iPads are very popular in our school．Many students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion．There is no doubt that with it we can listen to music，download learning materials，and so on．In other words，it's helpful to our studies，especially our English learning．

However，each coin has two sides．Some students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphere．What's worse，some even waste their precious time playing games．

In my opinion，school is a place where we should focus our attention on lessons，so iPads should be banned in classroom．I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration．

I am looking forward to your early reply．

Yours，

Li_Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达为正反方议论文。讨论iPad对学习的影响，要写出赞同的观点和反对的观点，及自己的观点，文章结构为：引句→ 正方观点阐述→反方观点阐述→自己的观点，论述两种不同观点主要是结合要点写，要注意遣词造句，自己的看法及建议没有要点，需要学生自己发挥。此类习作要求学生有很好的英语思维能力。

【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构清晰合理。在本篇习作中，使用了一些从句，如同位语从句：Many students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion．There is no doubt that with it we can listen to music。再如定语从句：Some students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphere．。除此之外，文章还使用了许多短语：in other words、waste…playing games、focus on等等。