题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,是学校的学生会主席,正在准备排练英语节目参加于2017 年 1 月 10 日举行的株洲市“十分好英语”(Ten-minute Brilliant English)竞赛(参赛者表演英语节目,时间十分钟)。要求你给你校外籍教师 Sophie 写一封电子邮件,向她说明竞赛的基本情况、你对节目的设想和排练的时间;请她担任一个角色和对脚本(script)进行修改。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Sophie,
The Ten-minute Brilliant English Competition will be held on January 10, 2017. The participants are required to perform English programmes in ten minutes.
As for our school, we will put on Romeo and Juliet on the stage. I’m hereby so privileged to invite you to act one of the roles, and I sincerely believe that your attendance will be a great encouragement to all of us. So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the school at 5 pm every day of this week.
In addition, I’ve attached the script of our programme to this e-mail and we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us. Many thanks!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
亮点说明:本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用:I sincerely believe that your attendance will b e a great encouragement to all of us.条件状语从句的使用:So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the school at 5 pm every day of this week.
固定句型的使用we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us.