题目内容
7.假如你是李华,某培训中心准备组织你校学生出国参加英语夏令营(English Summer Camp),夏令营活动安排如下:英国文化夏令营(The UK Culture Summer Camp),美国语言夏令营(America Language Summer Camp). 写一封申请信给该培训中心,报名参加其中的一个夏令营.信的内容必须包括:1.你感兴趣的夏令营.
2.为什么想参加这个活动.
3.对这项活动有怎样的打算和期待.
注意:
1.词数100左右.
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve English and learn more about English culture.
Yours truly,
Li Hua.
分析 本文属于提纲类写作,根据所提供的材料给培训中心写一封申请信,写作要点包括:1.在给出的两个夏令营中选出一个,说明选择这个夏令营的原因.2.给出参加这个活动的原因,比如可以拓宽视野,学会如何与人相处等等.3.在参加活动的过程中,会以怎样的心态对待这次活动,并对这次活动有着怎样的期待,比如期望更好的理解英语文化,期待此次活动圆满成功等等.写作时以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主要时态.
重点词汇:apply for (申请);For one thing…,For another…(一方面…,另一方面…);have a lot of knowledge of 精通);As is known to all(众所周知);高分句型:1.For one thing,having a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books,I am crazy about the country's culture as well as scenery.For another,I personally prefer British English,so while traveling there,I will have a chance to communicate with local people.
运用"For one thing…,For another…"使表达更加清晰有层次.
2.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
it句中充当形式宾语,代替if从句
解答 Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve English and learn more about English culture.
I am writing to apply for the UK Culture Summer Camp.For one thing,having a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books,I am crazy about the country's culture as well as scenery.For another,I personally prefer British English,so while traveling there,I will have a chance to communicate with local people.(高分句型)
As is known to all,English is playing an important role in international society.I expect to have a better understanding of English culture by visiting places of interest.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.(高分句型)
Yours truly,
Li Hua
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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