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18．假定你是李华，计划暑假期间到美国University of California学习英语，为期两个月，学习期间想找一份兼职工作．请给你的美国的朋友Mary写信求助，要点如下：
1．你的暑期安排；
2．做兼职的原因；
3．打算找的兼职工作：餐厅服务员、汉语教师等．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mary，
How are you doing？I am writing to ask you a favour．I'm planning to go to the USA to take a two-month English course at California University in June．I will absolutely benefit from it but the expenses are rather high for me．
To help cover the cost of my study，I aim to find a part-time job．Not only is it a good way to practice my oral English，it can also help me develop a better understanding of the American society．So I am wondering if you could ask around your neighbourhood to see if anyone wants a waiter in the restaurant or a Chinese teacher．I would appreciate it very much if you could do me this favour．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封写给美国的朋友Mary写信求助．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般现在时态为主．内容包括：一表明书信目的，说明自己的计划；二提出做兼职的请求和原因；三盼望答复．
高分句型：
1．Not only is it a good way to practice my oral English，it can also help me develop a better understanding of the American society．句子里Not only 位于句首，句子用部分倒装is it a good way to practice my oral English； develop a better understanding of 表示"更好的理解"．
这不仅是我练习英语口语的好方法，也有助于我更好的了解美国历史．
2．So I am wondering if you could ask around your neighbourhood to see if anyone wants a waiter in the restaurant or a Chinese teacher．句子里，第一个if引导的I am wondering 的宾语从句；第二个if引导 to see 的宾语从句．
所以我不知道你是否可以在你住的区域看看，餐馆里是否需要服务员，是否有人需要汉语老师．

解答 Dear Mary，
    How are you doing？I am writing to ask you a favour．I'm planning to go to the USA to take a two-month English course at California University in June．I will absolutely benefit from it but the expenses are rather high for me．（表明书信目的，说明自己的计划）
   To help cover the cost of my study，I aim to find a part-time job．Not only is it a good way to practice my oral English，it can also help me develop a better understanding of the American society．【高分句型一】So I am wondering if you could ask around your neighbourhood to see if anyone wants a waiter in the restaurant or a Chinese teacher．【高分句型二】I would appreciate it very much if you could do me this favour．（提出做兼职的请求和原因）
    Looking forward to your reply．（盼望答复）
                                                                             Yours，
                                                                            Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
该题要求考生根据所给提纲，应用所学 知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅通、语言得体的文 章．它不但要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且要有较强的 语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，是一种复合型的题型．