Question

9．假如你是李华，你所在的城市出现"共享单车"，请写一篇倡导低碳出行的演讲稿，要点如下：
 
注意：1．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2．词数 80-100；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear classmates，
The bright-colored public bikes-the Mobikes are now commonly seen on our city streets．With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams，the Mobikes provide a low-carbon way of getting around at minimum cost．Not only do they have zero air pollution，but also they can reduce traffic jams．Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours，you get physical exercise riding Mobikes，which is certain to be good for your health．They also have other advantages．You never have to worry about the Mobikes getting stolen wherever you leave them．Therefore，why don't we start cycling today？．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams，the Mobikes provide a low-carbon way of getting around at minimum cost
随着空气污染和交通拥堵的街道上经常陷入困境，这mobikes提供以最低的成本，低碳出行方式．
高分句型二：
Not only do they have zero air pollution，but also they can reduce traffic jams．Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours，you get physical exercise riding Mobikes，which is certain to be good for your health．
他们不仅零空气污染，还可以减少交通堵塞，而不是坐在长时间的一个小小的空间，骑mobikes能你的身体得到锻炼，对你的健康有一定的好处．

解答 Dear classmates，
The bright-colored pu blic bikes-the Mobikes are now commonly seen on our city streets． With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams，the Mobikes provide a low-carbon way of getting around at minimum cost（高分句型一）．Not only do they have zero air pollution，but also they can reduce traffic jams．Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours，you get physical exercise riding Mobikes，which is certain to be good for your health（高分句型二）．They also have other advantages．You never have to worry about the Mobikes getting stolen wherever you leave them．Therefore，why don't we start cycling today？

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．