题目内容
16.假设你的美国网友Daisy给你留了一个离线信息(offline message),告诉你她最近没有上网是因为她的母亲重病住院,而父亲也在为生计挣扎,她目前正处于苦恼中,不能专注于学业.请给她回离线信息,表达你的安慰和关怀.注意:1.词数120 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好(不计入词数).
Hi,Daisy,
I was wondering why you hadn't showed up online for such a long time.
.
Kind regards,
Li Hua.
分析 高分句型:
句型一:
There is no doubt that①what you are experiencing affects your life greatly,making ②you unable to focus on your study.
毫无疑问,你现在正经历的事情会极大地影响你的生活,使你无法专注于你的学业.
①There is no doubt that意为:毫无疑问的是….
②making为现在分词作结果状语,动词make与其逻辑主语 what you are experiencing 构成主谓关系.
句型二:
We have no choice but to①meet it.No matter what ②happens,you need to remain optimistic and try what③you can to help your parents.
我们除了面对它别无选择,无论发生什么,你都要保持乐观,并尽你的所能去帮助你的父母.
①have no choice but to意为:除了…别无选择.
②no matter what 形式上=whatever 无论什么,用来引导状语从句.
③此处为连接代词what引导的宾语从句,what在该从句中作宾语.
解答 Possible version:
Hi,Kourtney,
I was wondering why you hadn't showed up online for such a long time.
I'm sorry to know that your mother is seriously ill in hospital and that your father is struggling for a living.(针对离线信息,表达自己难过的心情)There is no doubt that what you are experiencing affects your life greatly,making you unable to focus on your study.【高分句型一】I understand how you are feeling at the moment and I truly wish that I could be of any help.(对于Kourtney的境遇,表示理解)Life can be hard at times and we can never expect what lies ahead.Life is a challenge.We have no choice but to meet it.No matter what happens,you need to remain optimistic and try what you can to help your parents.【高分句型二】It's by meeting difficulties and overcoming them that one learns how to survive.(安慰与鼓励Kourtney)I hope your mother will be all right soon and things in life will turn better before long.Hope we can talk soon.(表达自己的心愿)
点评 写开放类作文时,首先应明确写作的主题,写作时结构及内容要条理清晰,上下文衔接要合理;其次应注意选取相应的句式结构以及短语,注意时态及人称的正确使用.
A. | retire | B. | resign | C. | abolish | D. | remain |